by sweeteuphoria
Wow this story brought tears to my eyes...Nicely presented...Well Done...Keep up the great work
Very well done, a great story for the season. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Wonderful story that should be read by everyone! It was the storyline that caught me and kept me reading. This should be published in other places where everyone can have the opportunity to read it. Makes a good point that not everyone living on the streets choose to live there. Life happens and sometimes it leaves us in bad positions. I can relate really well to this as my life-partner passed away too early in life as well. I too could have ended up in the streets had it not been for my son that lived. Depression from losing loved ones can and will take a person this low.
I was a little unsure about it in some parts, especially as the time was a little unclear in some transitions, but that last line got me. Good one.
What a wonderful story for the holiday season. There were parts that brought tears to my eyes. The both of you did an excellent job with this story. Good luck in the contest.
I have to say, that I expected something a little different due to the title, more sexually charged which writing effectively is a skill unto itself. You have gone the extra mile to create something truly exquisite, a love story that is worthy of the term "love Story." Well done.
Blown Away - can't believe that this is not a real tale - Thank You
Thanks for a wonderful story of giving and receiving. Loved it and cried.
Some times it takes a story like yours to bring home to others just how lucky they really are;Well done and thank you.
Nicely done! I enjoyed every bit of it and I'm happy that others seem to share my feelings. I especially loved the last bit. It brought tears to my eyes. So nice to see a story like this around this time of year. Can't wait to see more collaborations.
All I can say is WOW! When I read a piece, even a short story like this one, i ask my self am i feeling the emotions of the characters? Tears came to my eyes as i finished reading this piece, I am very impressed, keep writing.
That story is very emotional, almost made me cry. Great characters, great storyline and I love happy endings.
A charming and compelling story. Excellent characterizations and descriptive imagery. Well paced plotting and natural dialogue. Kudos.
Welcome to the AH family.
a sucker for a happy ending, and this one was happier than most. It could have used a bit of editing, and some questions arose in my mind, but those are very minor things, and do not detract from the story as a whole. .
I just wanted to comment that this was exceptionally written...loved read it.
I loved it!! well written...I felt the piece through your words.....thank you for a wonderful interlude on a long journey....Keep on creating.....
I had to stop and blink away the tears from my eyes...this is a wonderful story, keep on writing!!
This was such a heart warming story. I got choked up many times. You did a great job on this story. 5***** toby9790.
Wet eyes! Plenty wet after reading this beautiful yet sad story! I don't think that I could have gone on if that's what happened to me! I would like to thank you for sharing this BEAUTIFUL FANTASTIC STORY WITH US!
LOVE YOU ALL! GREG!
OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.