All Comments on 'That's What Friends Are For'

Virgin cuck falls directly for the next manipulating bitch and states that he loves her after like 5 seconds?. Well I would say he loves fucking her but maybe should first look around what other pussy is out there.

One of if not the best story Ive ever read in here. I was like responding to what was happening and enjoyed the way you moved from the beginning to the end. Being mad at Jen for you and hoping she got hers. Happy for you how the story progressed with you to Sammi. Not a lot of stories turn me on like this one but it reminded me of my first time and it kept me hard through the last part of the story. Cant wait to read your next one.

That was an awesome story, you had me hard most of the time!

That was definitely one of the better stories I’ve ever read.

I came here to fap, bro. Not to get all teary eyed and feel good and stuff. Dammit. Good shit though.

The story was great. I was pretty sure where the story was going but you made it more passionate the way you put it.

I agree it would have been fun to have Jen see herself as the slit she really was, then again could have taken away from the passion that was there.

I really enjoyed this story the only thing I thought it was missing ws to have jen come over to find she no longer had justin too do her bidding any more and too be called a slut to her face . other than that fantastic !

Okay, second comment from me. When I wrote my first comment, I knew that on some level that I wasn't satisfied with the story. I tried to articulate what I was feeling and all of the comments I made still hold true. But then I started reading comments from others and one particular female posted the following and it struck a chord. I don't agree totally with everything that she said, but I will quote the best part here:

"Do you honestly expect the reader to accept that an 18 year old tomboy had miraculously developed a secret life as some sort of sex goddess! If you think Justin reflects a real 18 year male, and realism was your goal,you totally missed the boat with Sam. No "tomboys" are like that. No real girls that age are like that. What, has she been leading a secret life as a hooker? How did this girl suddenly learn to fuck like a pro? Knowing EVERYTHING and acting like a seasoned porn star?"

The other thing that I have to add is a realistic approach for TOMBOYS. In my own personal experience, every girl who was a Tomboy will follow one of two paths once they get their first period. They will either leave the Tomboy stuff totally behind and embrace their feminine side or they won't. The ones who continue being girls who like boyish activities typically discover that they are bisexual, unless they abandon their feminine side generally or entirely and become lesbian. I know that I'm going to catch flack for that statement, but it's what I have observed time and time again. I'm sure that there's a handful of exceptions out there, but as a general rule, I'll stand by my opinion. Tomboys do not become full on erotica sex goddesses.

Even though I have trouble with items in the story, I still enjoyed it.

It was really good. But it would have been so much better if Samantha had been saving herself for Justin. If she had lied about the two other guys going all the way with her, you probably could have worked the same dynamic equation. Maybe have Samantha saving her cherry for Justin by letting the other guys do anal with her. It still was a good story for your first effort.

This was sensational! You have a new fan!

Very well written. I don't usually connect with stories written in the first person but you nailed it. I love the slow build and the attention to character development. Just perfect.

Great story, nicely written and engaging. Just goes to show erotica can also be about romantic relationships.

Also loved the response to @anaon 'immaturity'

that was a great story.......even knowing where it would end up, I was HOOKED the whole way !!! going to check out your other work now :)

great story about young love and how stupid all us young men can be before we start thinking with the big head!

It is an excellently crafted story. It has good grammar and structure, and presents the angst of growing teenagers very well. JN

@anaon 'immaturity'

Yes, cold male insecurity dictates all women should be simpering submissive virgins waiting for the mighty man to come take what he wants.

I love seeing Loving wives incels come into other categories to spread their malice about women. Badge of honor.

Charming story.

The story was delightful and stimulating.

The negative comments say more about the responders immaturity than a criticism of the characters.

I really enjoyed this story - something I could relate to on so many levels. I still “carry a torch” for my first love and best friend 52 years later, though we never finally connected on the physical level of Justin and Sammi.

First two chapters with Sam and Justin were fucking annoying.....clearly the bitch wanted him and kept cock blocking him fucking others.....Justin is a wimp

This Justin is a woman obsessed walkover

Jen is abitch

It’s not the best plot in the world of course because it’s not a novel, but that was super hot nonetheless and very cute. I totally ship them

Just really beautiful; erotic and beautiful

I absolutely loved this story it was so cute.

Amazing story... Loved it

Sam manipilated Justin to take his first time. Sure she loves him but was focused on being his first so he wouldnt forget she took his virginity. Justin wouldve been better off with the slut going over, at least everything was honest and upfront without the ego of being someones first. For a so called bestfriend shes shit.

Excellent story structure and linguistics! Eroticism is more than just portrayals of sexual acts. The discovery of love is far more important in life and takes eroticism to a higher plane.

Great story. Don't get the trolls' comments.

Who wouldn't want their first time to be with someone that care / loves you? Good build up and climax(es). And, for once, the ending was not rushed.

Would like a sequel but can understand the author's dilemma for such a story. Some readers want a scorched earth treatment of Jen; others not so much. Personally, I'd like to see Sammi and Justin, go up to the lake on Sunday and run into Jen and just tell her that since Justin didn't want to intrude on time with her boyfriend especially when he has a hot new girlfriend in Sammi. Then, Justin and Sammi could visit their other "real" friends like Jim and work on cultivating a less tomboy reputation since Sammi would be in a bikini. and then the real dilemma begins - where do you take it from there? What will mom's reaction be? Sammi's family? Do Sammi and Justin stay together or ride off to college together? Break-up? How do these two get more experience? Do they need more experience? Lots of possibilities. Perhaps, the author could invite other authors to write the next chapter?

Am anonymous only because I don't have an account yet.

"No, because it's just like you, used."

Man this piece is full of great lines

"Love the One You're With"

verse: "... And if you can't be with the one you love honey

Love the one you're with, ..."

(attributed to Billy Preston)

This Top Ten song foreshadows you, and said it all back in 1970 - the greatest era of them all.

Thank God for teenage girls in love - 80% of guys would never have lost their virginity before 25 yrs.!

This was outstanding, much more than just an enjoyable read. I'm sure you get the "More Please" requests, but I still need to write it. More Please. I would have enjoyed Jen showing up and finding Sammi and Justin together (Sammi wearing only one of Justin's dress shirts), and maybe Sammi showing off her man's larger-than-average cock. 5 stars without any hesitation. Thank you for sharing your story.

This is beautiful. It's what I'm hoping for now at 31 after having been a Cindy most of my life.

Well Done!

An exceptional story, beautifully written, you have provided great characters who should be brought back for further adventures, especially to deal with the trollope that is Jen.

I came to read porn instead of watching it, just to try out something new, and I stayed for the story and your incredible writing. I know it’s weird because it always comes down to sex but I really loved the story and reading this, I actually felt kinda relatable to Justin in some ways, so I could really feel some moments just like how you described. Thanks!

Great writing and a good story; if a somewhat manipulative friend.

Second time for this story. You are a very talented writer. Great character development and the build up to the racy parts was tantalizing.

Wanted to read about how he was laying pipe to Sammi in the living room the next day and Jen come strolling in. Then him and Sammi keep going at it and tell Jen to take her nasty ass and kick rocks lol

Please write some more about these two characters! It's a great story, so far.

I LOVED it. Please do more.

Fantastic story! 5 stars! It was a great read and a fantastic build up. The only thing I would have changed or more hoped for was him kicking Jen to the curb. Maybe something like she shows up in the morning and Sam and Justin answers the door wrapped in a blanket or something and he tells Jen he knows and closes the door in her face. I am a fan of closer and the bad people getting their due.

This was a damned fine teenage love story. Perfect even. Anyone who finds the story incomplete is wrong. This is pretty much "and they lived happily ever after". We know he'll break up with Jen. How he does it, how she takes it, and how it turns out doesn't matter because he'll be so preoccupied with Sam that nothing else matters. To all young writers out there, if you're going to write a 6 page short story where only two characters appear on screen, then please, for the love of god, don't write an epilogue for a bunch of side characters who got no or little screen time and please don't write an unnecessary time skip epilogue. That's like ordering a five course meal then finishing with plain bread and water. Just no. To lovecraft68, great job.

One of the best stories I've read in a long time, five+ stars!

What a perfect story you have give us but unfortunately this story is nowhere near finished as there’s to my unanswered questions that needed to be answered. Jens and their parents reaction to their new relationship just to name two. Please continue on with this story...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved every aspect of the story. Sammi is the kind of woman every man needs. Thanks for the character buildup.

This was a perfect story! I love how it just wasn’t a page or two about fucking, but was actually an entire story with plot and character development! Though I wouldn’t mine a few smaller stories to get off to. This is arguably the best Literotica I’ve read to date (and I’ve read quite a few). I just want you to know just how great your work is!

Great story! 5 Stars and a favorite. I agreed that you should have finished with Jen coming over and Justin dumping her with Sammi present and in his arms when he does that.

Excellently written, excellent plot development, and character development. I agree with Hooked on Smut, it would have been nice to know how he broke up with Jen and his revenge Ops, almost forgot a 5-star story.

Rated 5 star, but would have been good to know how Jen was dumped and got what the slut deserved.

I just re-read it and loved it even more than the first time. Thank you for your writing!

I wish a Samantha was my first

A good story which I very much enjoyed. I had a small amount of difficult getting into the characters as all were outside my own realm of experience, but I finally was able to connect trough the excellent skill of the author. The tension was just right and the desire to know the outcome was strong as I scrolled and read.

My only negative (not major since I rated a 5) was I thought the finish (last few paragraphs) was not as well developed as the rest of the story. Not that I did not like the ending, just thought a little more detail and closure would have benefited the completeness of this story. Taken it up a notch so to speak. But please do not think I did not enjoy and very much like the story.

Like all your work it is beautifully written you have a real talent and always show an insitefull understanding of you characters and their personalities and feelings. Well done sir!.

Loved everything about it! It wasn’t just a quick fix for a horny reader.. it was incredibly romantic, sensual and fulfilling!

Thank you so much!

That was probably one of the best stories from an aspiring author I have read I a long time, I loved it thoroughly enthralling. Carry on the good work.

Excellent work. The pacing is fantastic, and it reads like an actual story, which one doesn't always find on here.

You have a talent to pull the reader in and keep them feeling like they are right there in the story. Great story. I look forward to many more of your pieces of writing. One of my favorites!

While I was reading this at first I thought that is was going to be a teen social story, however as I read on I realized that his relationship with Sam was going to amount to more than good friends! Fortunately the readers were rewarded with such an exceptional description of a first time and true first time love.

I thoroughly enjoyed your story as it reminded me of the intimate connection I still have with my first time, first love over fifty years ago!! Well done!

comment below me, same lol

This story just made me realize how single I am 🥲

This was such a real feeling story, that I felt a connection to. I could truly relate, I often wonder in my old age, what my life would had been like if my story had gone like this. I love my wife and kids, but I still wonder. Thank you for sharing!

Your story is one of my favorites. I've only read it about 5 times. Guys need to be hit in the head sometimes; women can be subtle about their feelings. My 1st time ended with an "air burst" followed by her saying, "You started this, you better be able to finish it!"

Was Sam lying about being in love with Justin for a while or did she lie to Justin about being with other guys in order to make Justin jealous and hopefully get him to make a move?

I loved your story it wasn’t just about sex it was love, the sex part was hot but when you add

love to it is so much better, One if my favourite story by far

I'm all for kinky sex, but you found my one true weakness: best friends falling in love. I've got me emotionally invested like no other story has and man I'm ridiculously happy for fictional characters. Sadly I've never had a male best friend and I'll continue to be jealous of the scenario. Well done.

I came here to fap but now I have tears in my eyes. This was such a wholesome story I found myself immersed. Good story.

Well that’s a great story line and I enjoyed the character build up with an exciting conclusion. Great job and fantastic details

Very nice character development, with some remarkable similarities to some of my own experiences many years ago!

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You did a good job. It brought back memories of friends who were female I school, and how close we were.

This was a soft, dear story of young lust turning to incredibly sweet first love. Samantha is the perfect first partner. Her maturity not only topped his childishness, but will probably hold them together for life. I see wonderful things ahead for them. Your writing is good. You need help with spelling and polish. Please give us more.

This story seemed so realistic. It seemed like real interactions among the characters. It was quite believable.

Great story, loved it.

5/5

Excellent buildup. Great development. So believable all the way through. We saw the sexy lady making love and the promise of the tomboy Sam for round two.

Really well done. Just AWESOME! Thank you and hope there is some kind of follow up.

FUUUUUUUCCCCKKKK with all the backstory and dialogue, I k ew this would pay off!! So worth the wait.

Great story and wonderful characters. Kinda knew where it was going, but you made it a great trip! The real gift of the story is it can't help but illicit memories of first loves and the first time (making love, not just screwing). Think I will go take my bride by the hand and ....

I read it again whenever I need a pick-me-up. Thank You!!!

Wow that was very hot my hubby loved it as much as I did.

Hope that you will tell us what happens next.

What can i say. Beutifull !,,,,, Love. jOHN. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxx5

Reads perfectly and allows you to understand the characters.

Great story!

This is by far the best story I’ve read on this site. I love the character development, the emotional depth, and tasteful use of sexual words. This is the kind of story I’ve been looking for.

Really great story. Kudos.

If only i can vote more than 5 stars. Iwould have given more than 5 stars. This is a wonderful and beautiful story. From the begining till the end the stiry run smoothly and nicely. I hope there is more to this story. Keep it up. Thank you very much.

I'm 67 years old and would still love to experience something like that. Wow...

Wow, excellent story. It is similar to another I found some years ago that had a similar theme, long-ish buildup, but enjoyable, satisfying conclusion. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Great story, thanks!

...to include Jen getting her comeuppance and getting dumped by the guy she thought she was in total control over...

Great plot! Very good character development for Samantha, Sam, and Sammi! Also for the many thoughts inside of Justin. Very good story.

That I wish my first time had been like that.

Not really anonymous, Path2ozark, but the Captcha code shows six characters but only accepts four when I log in.

Shame she slutted for other guys first...

More, please!

If there is not a follow up to this, im going to riot hahah!

Should have been longer to tell that bitch Jen that he didn't want or need her anymore, that he found someone that truly loved him and not someone that just used him and made fun of him.

Good story, could use a follow up.

Anony Mous

That was amazing!!!

PLEASE write a follow-up story! This was so good! You're an excellent writer. We'd all appreciate more stories from you.

With the characters Justin and I guess Sammi being bestfriends and sadly Sammi being a coward to tell Justin how she really felt about him chose to fuck 2 other guys than be honest to the man she adored since childhood,and soiled her virtue to get laid instead of finding courage to tell Justin she loved him.

Sammi almost made the biggest mistake by letting Justin go,but he realized Sammi offered to give him the best first time out of love for him.But Sammi should have waited and gave each other their virginities,it would have made it more meaningful,but it lessened Sammi's overall character to let 2 other guys fuck her without much emotion from Sammi especially if she was so in love with Justin.

Admittedly Sammi fucked-up by not saving herself for Justin,but she made up for it somewhat by letting her be his first.I hope Sammi cherishes Justin's gift and never takes it for granted.

Also I am not saying Sammi is a bad character,but she was obviously tomboyish,impatient,scared,and immature to tell Justin but thankfully Justin finally figured it out before Sammi fucked up again and left,typically girls on here on Lit should be braver and tell their partners how they feel,it is so one-sided when they don't confess.Decent story somewhat regardless.

Reminded me about the first with both my wife both are not with me now for 3 years and the other sometime soon she doesn't remember me and our daughter a memories of the past .

We all remember our first time and our first girl friend, there's a lot more to sex than sex............. Second time for me for this story, very good and very sexy. You got my vote. I'm pushing 80 and remembering means a lot.

Your writing style is addictive. The dialogues are epic but it would be better if they were longer and had a little more passion to them. Please try to extend the part how characters unfurl their feelings it makes them more realistic. Expectable but a rather satisfying ending.

Really enjoyed it fucking hot