All Comments on 'The Accident That Wasn't'

Everything we needed in just a few words.

Missing a good chunk of the story including a full ending

Told from the point of view of the husband, it doesn't need more. You don't need to know what the ledgers say. You don't need to know if the wife and uncle were having an affair. It's an attempted murder told perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

That's a masterclass in economical use of words. Good stuff.

Way too short. Might have well just been the title of a story with little substance. I will give it a generous 3 as the skeleton of a story is mostly there.

I stumbled upon this again. I had forgotten the title and author... bookmark. Besides it being an rare storyline, is that it itself is memorable. There are stories kinda like it, but when I read them I’m comparing them to this story; it set the standard for me.

Too short. At least there wasn't as much time wasted reading it.

Those complaining about the length have no imagination. 1) He has a successful business that his greedy wife wants more (all?) money out of. 2) She's having an affair with "Uncle" David. Don't know, don't care if a real uncle or a "best friend" that the kids call uncle. 3) They tried to kill him to get the business, 3A) Uncle David has been embezzling, as the ledgers will prove.

Short, but I was able to get through it. Great story.

I find it hard to believe she or anyone would admit what she did at the end there.

I liked it, good flash story. I guess I've read enough LW to fill in the gaps. The story is complete😁

It does what a flash story is meant to do, the operative word is "FLASH". A single snap shot at a life or an event.

Simple really!

Great as a flash story, would love to see "the REST of the story!"

Makes me want to make an account. Very precise story, the only reason i'm commenting in a good way is that it could be true. Thank you for all the other stories.

Good story bit too short and needing more flesh on the bones.

Perfect succinct. 5 stars.

This is exactly what it is supposed to be, a quick description of an event,not a story,stories take time to unfold. I am not a fan of flash so I leave no rating....JZK

Can't understand that apparently read the description but STILL are pissed when it was as described. Can't fix stupid huh! Good tale!

somewhere east of Omaha

A flash story is just that. Don't expect all of your questions to be answered. Sometimes you just have yo use your imagination and fill in the blanks yourself.

Well written, 4stars. Finish it, I'd give it 5.

Short, fast, and sweet. Thanks for your writing.

please, post this stuff in non-erotic. great story though

Too short, defiantly needs to be expanded. This has all the earmarks of a great story.

Story was going well until you abruptly ended it!!

Good first 1/2 of story. Now it just needs an ending. 3 points for 1/2 a story.

ended with a bang...........bye bitch

short and sweet. LOL

To the point. I LOVE IT! DMW aka

Short sharp and to the point, but I wish there was more. (Before and after the incident.)

Reminds me of a few HDK stories. Still, a very good story, Slirpuff, thanks. Like someone else said, short, sweet and right to the point.

5 stars.

How is erotic and why is it in literotica site?

For a short one, it was pretty darn good….if well worn.

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4 ****

An abrupt story, without beginning, without end.