All Comments on 'The Agreement Ch. 01'

Great story! Loved every bit.

Tho story meets all the criteria of agreat story. Well written, hot premise, realistic, very descriptive.

Loved it. I had my cock in my hand the whole time wishing it was me.

hot scenario, good description. Maybe not the best dialogue or view into the emotions of the characters, but still hot. But, so many mistakes in referring to the male character names really diminished the read. Things like "They untangled themselves and disposed of the used condoms and rested for several minutes. Jeff went into the bathroom....Phil came out of the bathroom, his penis still long but no longer erect."

in your dreams would 2 men, so far never gay, fuck each other. plot is just too dumb

Despite a couple of derogatory comments from anonymous readers, you have made a great start as a contributor to Literotica. Good choices of subject matter, graphic descriptions and good writing. 5 star all the way. Congratulations!

"Despite a couple of derogatory comments from anonymous readers..."

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Hmm? Funny, most of the anonymous comments I see are positive. What about them? Anonymous is anonymous, whether it is positive or negative. From the context of your comment, it isn't anonymous you have a trouble with, it's those who dare have a different opinion from yours.

thanks - really enjoyed it and hope to see more along this line!

Many women have similar desire. Women need to set up the right situation. It is easier to get guys to do it than most think. Very good for relationship.

Nice story, not too rushed. My wife liked it as well and it got the conversation started. And yes, once the juices start to flow I think a guy would do just about anything.

You are using a screen name ass hole and you still can not say out loud you don't like this type of story?

Well, I do and I loved it.

Keep writing and put it anywhere you want. I have started stating what type of action to expect at the beginning for the faint of heart.

I found this sexy erotic I was so hard .i master after.steven x and I stuck vibrator up my ass .i want try a mmf 3some now