All Comments on 'The Alien Ship Ch. 03'

Good chapters so far, but I have a nagging feeling Cindy is up to no good.

Its a solid idea for a story. But NOTHING IS HAPPENING! Pick up the pace, Someone needs to fuck, or blow something up. Dont just dick around on an alien spaceship taking tours and watching cinemax. Slow building is fine but this is getting really boring.

I don't mind a story that takes the time to set things up. Far too often stories just barge right into the sex and leave you wondering why they bothered.

I like your basic idea, several interesting concepts can be explored. The two methods of copying a personality is worth expanding or could almost be a story in itself. It's time to pick up the action a little, not necessarily with sex but something to hold everyone's interest. Keep up the good work! (All this from a guy who never wrote anything.)

I like the story too but sex is necessary. Why invite the girlfriend on board when there are hot fembots!

Story is going well, ground work being laid and possibility of many side story spins. I enjoy the hints at the sex that are coming. A good build up makes the sex scene all that much better. Looking forward to more chapters.

Literotica the main focus being erotica meaning erotic stories i realize to some prudes nudity is more then erotic enough. but not for most others either sex it up or throw it into the recycle bin.

It's refreshing to read stories that are not just fucking. Great story.

I have been considering / working up the courage to write a story of my own, this Author is trying his wings in a way similar to what I might do, ... he gives me some hope, ...

-- and although I would choose to exploit this stories' wonderful ship differently than Kyle does, ... however, it is Scorpionicus's tale to tell, and I'll leave him to it, ... ;-) ttfn

A very nice story. I am enjoying. AAAA++++