All Comments on 'The Apartment Complex Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Continue

continue the story. I love you stories and would love to see you continue them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great story telling

The second chapter of The Apartment Complex is a sweet and touching romance. The buildup is well done, and the main female character is portrayed very realistically. (As a conservative Baptist, she would not be using loads of profanity while making love). The plot and the love scene are perfectly proportioned in the overall storyline, and the result is another excellent story from this author.

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