All Comments on 'The Appliance Repairman'

by baddad53

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SELSTIMSELSTIMabout 13 years ago
Not Really.....

much of a story. It"s not even very erotic to qualify for a stroke story. Your writing is adequate but your characters are pretty shallow and immature. What I mean by immature is not able to delay gratification. That ususally includes people that are really insecure and have never learned to make long term goals and a step by step plan to achieve them. To associate pleasure with the accomplishments of completing those goals rather than relying on the stimulation of internal reinforcing mechanisms to make themselves feel better about who they are. I don't usually comment on stories like this but after I read your bio I thought I would give you some advice. If you don't like the comments that people leave you shouldn't assume that they are uneducated and can't refrain from self gratification. I'm glad your wife's self-esteem has improved even if it's by means of pseudo-accomplishments. I'm sorry but I don't have anything published under this moniker and the only articles I do have published are in JABA which require article submissions to be double spaced, type written and on one side only of standard 8.5" X 11" printing paper or they won't be considered for publication. So, I couldn't use my crayons. On the bright side, I was able to use both hands so the typing was completed in half the time. I don't take offense to your lifestyle just your assumptions. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Good Story

My only question is how do I get a job in that community as a handyman?

Mr_BostonMr_Bostonabout 13 years ago
Nice

Slut/whore wife? 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Just another slut

wife story and not a very good one at that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
so - so

didn't do much for me. better luck next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Spew

Yet another awful wife who should have her fat ass dumped in the street.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

This whore has a cuck for a husband, and she wants to ruin her friend too.

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