All Comments on 'The Appointment Ch. 03'

...Adriana and Troy need to enjoy regular "massages" in lots different settings and you need to write about each one especially when Troy's well hung friends join them ..thanks ..

I think it's quite decent, except that ending doesn't sound like the ending... It seems to hint at/foreshadow more.

Loved it. It was really great. Can you describe how Troy looks like too. And minimise the references to the deceased wife, it is sad to read about and takes all ten joy out of reading it.