All Comments on 'The Apprentice Ch. 01'

by srlmort

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"Straddling it is no fun"

All I could think was nk (while envisioning a picket fence)

poisonedLustpoisonedLustover 13 years ago
:)

It was nice...It made me smile..I like it so far..keep going,plz!!lol

avidreader_01avidreader_01over 13 years ago
nice

great start, im looking forward to reading other chapters...write faster

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well Done

This looks like the beginning of a good story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 13 years ago
More!

Lol tried to click onto the next page (*grin* because I NEEDED there to be another page), and there was no next page...arrgh! Really good story, and can not wait for the next chapter!

Marbles29Marbles29over 13 years ago
Great

I cant wait to see how this turns out..hope the Next chappie is soon

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