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I reached Sabine from under the armpits and lifted her on top of me, enjoying for another moment the pressure of her tits against mine, and of her wet pussy against mine, and then rolled her over. She looked at me with a raised eyebrow, as if curious as to what I could do.
She was just so beautiful I wanted to come again looking at her. I began to imagine myself as a man, one with a hard, curved cock. Not overly big or thick, but big enough. Rolling her over so that I was on top, I began to thrust up against her. In my mind my hard cock filled her, deep and good. Her softness closed around me, tight, wet, hard, and perfectly shaped for my cock. As I fucked her, I buried my face in between her beautiful tits, breathing her in. I thrust, and thrust. She grabbed me by the buttocks, her nails cutting into my flesh in a way that made me push even deeper. I could feel her pulling on her vaginal walls, sucking my cock in deeper and pushing it out harder with every thrust. Sucking on her tits, I came again, exploding like a man inside her. At least that's what I think it felt like.
I rolled off of her, spent. Climbing out of the bed, she walked to the door, saying, "I have to change and get back to work. Can you stay here? We are not finished yet."
"No, we are most definitely not," I said. "I'm here until Tuesday, and I'm all yours.
- COMMENTS
Bramblethornover 10 years agoI guess the comments show you can't please everybody, but I certainly liked it. Keep writing!
SumKaliGoodGoodover 10 years agoI really want to know more about your characters and what happens next.
tygzover 10 years agoSometimes negative criticism is properly leveled against a piece - and other times it seems that the complainer is either just a negative person or is merely wrong. While this work wasn't perfect, it was hardly formulaic (except possibly the boyfriend - but she was straight, and to establish that she either needs a current or former man; I personally like the setup here as it establishes motive for her straying - how many different possibilities are there here? Can't say that I've run across a cheapskate boyfriend with a phobia of being in Paris before!).
No, the criticism here seems to be the work of someone intent on belittling a new author - it seems to me to be some strange sort of literary bullying.
Kiki - please take heart and continue your story. You've set up a fine scene; no, there hasn't been much penetration and there is a shocking lack of DD's and ten-inchers, but trust me readers those things never actually add to a story (best to leave precise details to the imagination). I like the characters so far, and I'd like to know more about them - perhaps during the span of time that one of them is at work we can find out more about the protagonist and what's driving her?
