All Comments on 'The Arena'

by JustATale

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
bullshit

so full of crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I enjoyed it

ty. please write more

Tom CollinsTom Collinsover 18 years ago
Not bad at all.

OK, JAT, you got one that flamed you and one that loved you. Now it's time for the middle ground...lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I"ll push it over the top....

I loved it!! Can't wait for more!!

freemic3040freemic3040over 15 years ago
AMAZING

Loved the premise of this story and wish it would continue! I would probably get in the ring just so I could be forced to serve. Huge fantasy of mine!!

freemic3040freemic3040over 15 years ago
Also

PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY!!!

zutoph507zutoph507almost 15 years ago
It wasn't terrible...

I kind of liked it... but it needed more back story and more of an ending. It was like reading an except from the middle of a complete story. Keep writing... practice only makes us better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
hoT!

i really liked it! i am getting hard imagining Jason sucking a large piss slit... i imagine him under my submission ... eating my cum,,, sucking my cock without any choice...

Aurelian69Aurelian69about 11 years ago
More !!

Please write another chapter !!!! I want to know what Horace will do to Jason without an audience, maybe we can see his sweeter side too

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So glad you wrote this

I love erotic stories, especially ones like these

this one is my favorite out of all of them. Makes me hard every read.

I hope you read this and write more dirty fiction XD

MrsTookMrsTookabout 10 years ago
More Stories Please

Love, love, love this theme. Please tell me more about other opponents or these same two...so HOT!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Rxcellent wrestling story

Excellent erotic wrestling story. Wrete more stories like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good story

More live stories in real life combat should end this way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wonderful story From a former Winner

This is a concealed story from a individual who was a wrestling winner multiple time

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Go for It

Excellent story. Very. Good follow thru from beginning to ir.

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