by unknooown
I actually like the story. I mean I am into the rough housing around with my boyfriend. its actually really fun and we both enjoy it.
But for the fucking morons who have to leave comments about 'go die, eww' umm you douche bags. It is under non consent genre. There is even a breif summary of what it will be about. You're the fucking idiot who then continues to read it knowing full well you're not into this type of stuff.
Soooo shut the fuck up and stop complaining. Its that simple.
It was actually kind of interesting. I myself do something a bit with my boyfriend like this. (of course its all fun/roleplay like). Im actually wondering if your going to continue this chapter even more?
I really, REALLY like NC/R stories but I didn't really like this one. This one just made me kind of sad.
Also, the dialogue was confusing. And I wish there'd been something to establishe the characters and their relationship to each other. There was no context.
And cruel! I mean I like rough and dominant but this was just mean. How could she love him? Or even stand this bastard? And the funny thing is she is so sure he cares and even loves her... lol
Sick woman
Do people really enjoy such cruelty and humiliation??? :/
you'd just read another LW story and be pissed. So fuck you in the heart!! I gave this a 5
Just rather unpleasant really. I like a bit of rough and tumble but this was just a common tale of coercion and abuse.