All Comments on 'The Argument'

What a nice fast ending story, nice idea for the plot, nice way of writing

I wish I had a roomate like you! Five stars!

@confed_mecha--You're right. I had this story laid out perfectly in my head, and when it got to the transition I knew exactly what I wanted, but when I wrote it, it didn't come out like I wanted. Oh well--the perils of writing.

i do believe its a very good piece maybe a little better transition from argument to sex but hey just my opinion please keep writing

Thank you for your insightful, intelligent and constructive feedback. I really appreciate how eloquently you phrased your displeasure with my story. Please do continue to critique my writing skills.

Crap

I love this story.That's it. Simply love it. 5 stars.