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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Eritic submission; even from a femme/domme 'CFNM Mistress' like Barbara. Voted 5 + BTW!

Fond of rough 'Anal' sex, with either over-sized dildos or a well-hang human 'Master' highly acceptable; I empathized with this situation from my many past experiences. The writer [A submissive naked male we assumed] must have been orgasmic whilst seeing your reluctant/lesbian encounter. [My NM group would not be able to resist joining in.]

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
less narration; more detail

Thanks for your story. Your writing will be stronger if you use less narration (show us don't tell us. One example: how did she know what the masseuse was thinking? Along, the same lines what does delightful.personality mean? Be more specific and give us examples, please. Keep on writing!

seetheartinmeseetheartinmeover 3 years ago

Next chapter please!

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