All Comments on 'The Awakening'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
loved it

that first time is such a mixture of feelings and sensations, but, when you realize that you have taken that monster into your tight little hole that feeling of pride begins to set in, and then the yearning to do it again, and it never leaves you. It is 50yrs since my first one and I would love another right now. Cheers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow!

Great story, loved the build up, hope there's another chapter...

adjoaqadjoaqabout 11 years ago
booyah!

you're too much! loved it.

nanobotnanobotabout 11 years ago
Better and better

The easy style and naivete make this story sweet and sexy. Very like Stephen King in his early days. Love your wrap up in the end transforming this from an anecdote to a provocative glimpse into the future.

IwanttwoIwanttwoover 4 years ago
Wow!

Tell me he becomes a cock sucker too!

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...