All Comments on 'The Babysitter'

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don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Good, but could have been better

Ying needed to have an excuse to do more baby sitting. In case you don't know it, babies with Asian mommies and Caucasian daddies are very beautiful babies, and since his wife knows all about this relationship, this otherwise good story could be much, much better. Maybe there is room in your mind to write more to this story?

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