All Comments on 'The Bachelor Auction'

A glorious love story, well written, full of feeling. You are a talented writer. I just wish it had been longer so I could have enjoyed it more.

Bravo!

I too would have liked it to be longer. Maybe there might be more chapters to come? You are a good writer. Thanks again!

...that this was sweet and well-written, but I disagree that it was too short--I thought it was concise and just about right. Best, Ken

My fourth grade teacher was not one I'd like to see in a blue bathrobe, though I really liked him. He just wasn't the motherly sort. In the eighth grade, my English teacher actually had gone out with my dad in high school, so it had an incestuous potential. I actually called her 'Mom' once to my everlasting mortification, and her glee. A favorite teacher, to be sure, but.... I never had a crush on any of my teachers.

There had better be another chapter or CAP811 isn't going to get a good grade. Keep it going.

This is a great story,well written,erotic and not the usual crap.No one is humilated,degraded nor do I feel bad and a little dumber for reading it.Thanks and please write more,you have real talent.

I really liked your story as it was horny as well as precise. U sure have got talent. Keep it up!! I sure like to read ur further story.

Your story was realistic and nicley handled with great

delicacy. A very lucky teacher and her former student

celebrate LIFE!! More of your fine writing please~~!!

I loved the gentle humor and humanness of the story. It was sexy but real. Most of us have had a teacher we felt really close to, maybe not in a sexual way, but with the potential to possibly develop that way years later. Great Job!

Impressive work and a fantasy that we all share.

You keep repeating your impact, because you write so well.

This is the third of your stories that I've just read and mightily enjoyed. Apart from the fact that you are a very talented storyteller I would like to commend you for creating very sympathetic, realistic characters. Thank you as well for having a very good understanding of the female psyche at different stages of maturity. Many writers just make two-dimensional female characters, and in erotica, that just doesn't work. This one REALLY works.

And need I say the story was very HOT?

It was a fun story! :)

I'm a teacher myself and I have had many fantasies about some of my students. Your story hit the right note with me,I had a very intense orgasm while reading it!!

Susan in Aberdeen

I truly enjoyed your story of being able to become re-acquainted with and making love to your former teacher. It was very well done with nothing but positive feelings by all concerned. It was especially erotic that the lady had spent her life living a rather restricted sex life, but then decided she was going to take the bull by the horns - or something else - and just enjoy herself.

I'd love to read more by you. You are very, very good.

woodlands1946

Well writen. Made me think back almost 20 years ago about my english teacher and well "only if".. Keep up the good writing..

Very gentle and well told. i guess many of us would like to do those things to teacher. Nice twist at the end - I thought he was going to ask to bugger her.

Keep it up

one of the best mF stories i've read.

Well done!

becomes the student

and every classroom assignment is also homework.

this lovely little story deserves to be found and enjoyed by many thoughtful readers

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