All Comments on 'The Balcony'

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I really liked it, especially how you built their relationship. I think you should continue with their story, her's and Ian's. Maybe a bit more on the romance aspect (I think you implied at the end that they are in a relationship ). Overall a great story, very hot.

This was the first story of yours that I've read and I thought it was amazing! Incredibly well written and descriptive, I felt like I was there and experiencing it...

Wow just saw one of the comments that said this was boring but hell no, this was not only hot, it was thrilling. Full of emotions, extremely descriptive. Incredible! Loved it.

very good love it!!!! more please