All Comments on 'The Ballad of Jaimie and Vera Ch. 02'

But, I found the jump in time to be unclear and it left me a bit confused for a while. I guess I prefer those types of changes to be more explicitly described.

I'm so sorry! Normally, when indicating a scene change, I use a uniform series of line breaks. Although those line breaks were present in the document I sent Literotica, they aren't here! I'm sorry for the confusion, even though I know you won't re-read this just to see it with proper spacing!

This is my darkest dream come true! I so want to be Vera. I'm a 100% gay girl, but that would make me go horny as hell. I don't know why but a girlcock, fuck yeah, I'd do that any time! Please keep it coming 😍😍😍😍

Spectacular story and amazing sex! Please keep it going!

I think Jaimie and Vera should make Kara there sex slave. :)

Now im worrying all my life the stories goes „the mens are the sex maniacs“ and now im reading this chapter and you contouring it in a total different sight ….. bunnies