All Comments on 'The Ballad of Tam Lin'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
Adult Fairy Tales ? I feel as close to ten years old as I'll ever get.

Janet was droll to the bone, the bone of T.L. that is . I don't know whether to watch porn or start collecting baseball cards again. A very witty, offbeat but not off key , fabulous fable by author.

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 11 years ago
I liked it.

Interesting and very well written. I, for one, will be eagerly awaiting your next posting.

thebuffalothebuffaloover 11 years ago

Out-freaking-standing! Very well written and captivating from start to finish.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Most excellent...but...

I truly enjoyed this fairy tale. I read Fantasy/SciFi and Non-Human from time to time, and this was clearly in one or the other, your choice. Yes, there were two wives 'enchanted' in this tale, but those, including their marital status, were incidental! Sweetie is clearly a future wife (and Mother!) but she has been downright blase, rather than adventuresome. Still, this is a Halloween Contest entry and my rating will reflect the category of its submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Load of crap. Carterhaugh is on the England/Scotland border.

There is no 'fall' there, there is autumn. There are no 'creeks', there are burns.

If you want to use a border ballad as the basis for a story, do some basic research.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great Story

Would Really like to read more just like it.

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