All Comments on 'The Baller and The Nurse'

But seriously, what does a girl have to do to cut a break with you? I guess you could call this a romance, but it didn't seem to be going in that direction until almost the end. And thank you for pointing me to the first part of the story. Wouldn't it have been easier to just call them chapter one and chapter two? Was that the end, or is there going to be a chapter three? You left the ending a little ambiguous, please continue.

Lol, I see the overall themes of the story were all touched on by the first comment. :)

I love Yesinia, too.

This is one of those stories that is complex enough to not fit really well in either Romance or Reluctance, yet fits in both. How many classic "bodice ripper" stories use Reluctance and male-Dom themes like this, only to reveal that the man might have some humanity to go along with his power? Although the sex itself is too naughty for said bodice rippers. (rawr)

I really enjoy the spice, the Spanish flavor, and, plainly, the fact that she is a curvy Latina. We do not see a lot of Hispanic stories that have the authentic flavor here. And the author chose very modern circumstances, and some very challenging and all-too-real worries.

Even though the story started in Non-con, it's nice to have it end up here. Giving Yesinia a happy ending was the right thing to do. :)

I hate Yesenia. And I definitely didn't buy the love story. But the anal scene on day one was cool.

Part one of this story had great dialogue. Part two was painful to read at times - especially Yesenia's lines.

Not my favorite, sorry.