All Comments on 'The Baptist Woman'

I think you need to keep this going for quite a while, even back home.

Some women are in same situation as Sally with a lot of repressed desires. Few take action, those that do usually enjoy it and make up for lost time.

I couldn't even finish the story. Maybe guys who just want a quick stroke story would get off on it, but your narrative is very wooden (no pun intended) and your spelling and syntax errors were too much for me. Then again, I'm an English teacher... I'm not trying to be mean. I think you have potential, but need some writing instruction or a creative writing class to learn how to proofread and how to make your stories flow.

I didn't even notice the technical or grammar issues as some might point out. They might be correct but it did not bother me AT ALL. Fun and erotic story for which I hope we see more chapters of!

Maybe if you want to get published you will need an editor but as far as I'm concerned 5 stars!

I think Sally is totally ready to serve. Clearly the Master must emerge, and tell Sally how it is to be.

Thanks Don

EPICALLY BAD!