All Comments on 'The Bastard Ch. 01'

Bravo - quality start, can't wait for the rest.

It's nice to feel like I'm actually reading something rather than just looking at a fuck story. You write like an actual author instead of a pervert with Word XP. Interesting characters already and it's just starting.

Excellent start. The fact that I live in the Boston area and know types like your characters helps, certainly, but it's your writing that takes the lead. Nice to read something real. Now cut to the sex, will ya?

This is what you can do for more than a few. So good so far it belongs some where else. Onward and thanks Author.

With High Regard