All Comments on 'The Bastard Ch. 05'
by H. Jekyll
- 15 Comments
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThis "story" wanders all over the place. I wonder if the "writer" has a point to all this or if he's just sleep walking.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoI really loved this story because it is something different and looked into the mind of a "bastard." His thought processes and reflections on the world around him makes for a very interesting read and because of that I am sorry to see it end. I would like to see a few more chapters on their relationship developing but perhaps that would defeat the purpose of the story. In either case, it was a great effort to do something unique and creative. For this type to story, the sex was perfect and did not need to go into massive amounts of detail.
Anonymousabout 17 years agothe characters were very interesting.
hopefully more stories like this are forthcoming
Anonymousabout 17 years agoExcellent. A beautifully, maturely crafted tale, which I have thoroughly enjoyed reading.
BenLongabout 17 years agoBoring? Not on your life. Well written, intriguing, a joy to read. Good to the last word. I guess it might be boring to the comic book set, but for the rest of us - thanks a lot.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoBrilliant psychology, and more to the point, exceptionally fine building and shifts in the dialogue. Good elipses too. The stuff film dialogues are made of. I'm not sure it really qualifies as erotica since the aim isn't to tease the reader's fantasies. More a very lucid portrait of the tensions between an inventive, powerful libido and the complexities of attachment and people and caring, and messy, complex, intriguing stuff like that ! Good luck to you, for the mess and for the writing.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI think that the person who said this story wanders more than likely does more movie watching than reading. This was a very image-filled piece, but at the same time gave such a poignant literary delivery. An excellent story, overall. Well written and worded. One of the best I've read in any category. I'll stop now.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWhat a total and utter bastard! I hated him, I hated how he hurt Elizabeth and I wanted to kick his ass... but eventually I started to like him and I loved how deliciously conflicted he became at the end. I think, he, almost, sorta, redeemed himself? Or was it Elizabeth who redeemed him?
I loved it!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoi can actually sympathize with this guy. its hard to make up your mind if you really love a girl. sometimes you love someone so much that you think yourself unworthy. just screwing around for fun is easy but actually giving up part of yourself to one girl is much, much harder than having sex with a whole bunch of different girls.
retrorococoover 14 years agoThat story was laced with so much emotion, it had me crying like a baby! That was one of the very best stories I've ever read! I loved it soo much! It was so goddamn cute and sweet and heartbreakingly sad, but in a good way. The ending was absolutely perfect! The whole story was freaking unbelievably perfect!!! Thanks for this piece of perfection!!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoAny woman who would go back to or stay with a man who she KNOWS is having unprotected sex with random women deserves whatever disease he gives her.
chilleywilleyover 5 years agoWhat a gem of writing! My second reading, I read it years ago, and it lingered in my mind. When you can't think of an improvement, what can one do but praise it as a story beyond compare.
Chilley
Wargamerover 2 years agoAnother silly story about silly people, it has no redeeming features at all
1/5
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