All Comments on 'The Bastard; Loyal to One Ch. 01'

This promises some intriguing variations on an old theme: I'll look out for more. Thank you.

I liked your story it's really nicely written. I just think that it seems to lack emotion but then again, I assume you are male. Most male stories are like that, beautifully written but lack emotion. I'm interested to see if this is the end of the story or if it goes on from here. I would be interested in seeing how the "Lady's" husband would react if he caught her and Matthew/Melvin interacting with one another the way they did. I also find it interesting that he didn't accept the first girl as being his mate but was ready and willing to accept the married woman as being his mate. The woman with the experience and who seemed to get off on having other men sexually assault her. I thought that was interesting in itself. Anyhow, good writing and good visuals as well. :)

isn't he a freaking tweeb !!!!