All Comments on 'The Beast Within'

Once again i feel myself drawn into your story. I eagerly await the next installment. For that, i can offer no higher praise, well done.

....mention of the man's name....an excellent story about Laresa and Dark Beast (Great Bear) and what happens when she leaves him because of the lie. You made that story your own, which is good, especially since it connects them very well. Way to go, Dark....