All Comments on 'The Beautiful Nancy'

Kinda, sorta lack of imagination. Didn't notice any errors; it wasn't filled with crudities but no real originality either. Very predictable. Please keep trying, I think you can do better with practice.

I absolutely loved it! More development, more Nancy!

Thomas,

You made me cum writing that about you and I!

Your sweet, check out my new myspace though. I'll email you hon!

Nancy

great hot sex-nice characters, nicely written-thanks

Hot, hard, and fast, excellent first time. We're sure there will be more, another chapter please.