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by Just Plain Bob

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Ducky7Ducky7over 14 years ago
Well he won't have to worry about her running

around on him any more. Now he will know where she is. That is until he makes it big and get a plastic surgeon to fix her up and she can start fucking around again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
JPB....

....quick tell your critics the moral of the story, they apparently can't handle the complexity-digdaddy-I could "draw you in" to a snakepit with a handful of fried dough!LOL-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Interesting story - so why does he take the slut

back? Opps, forgot this is one of JPB's signature wimp male / slut female story lines. Oh, the clucks will like it. Joan

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
short, fast and to the point, but a complete story

I think it was the third person POV threw me off at first, but the story drew me in to it. Well done. Thanks

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...