All Comments on 'The Beauty Within'

An enjoyable piece done with taste, stopping at the right places. Good luck!

Now where is the camera?

:)

Maharat

How exciting it was to read your piece. You managed to communicate the blossoming of a women who has come to find her beauty and the appreciation she has for her discoverer.

A beautifully woven fantasy, written with taste.

This was beautifully written! :o) Great insight Hon.

Insightful, lovely story. I think its my favorite of what you have posted so far, though the one about the masqurade is up there too.