All Comments on 'The Bed Test'

I absolutely loved your story. It did wonderful things to me and for me. Thank You. Can't wait to add you to my favorites.

so don't let the negativists get you down. I loved the story, and it kindled my own imagination for another story as well. Does it need editing? Yes. A little more careful typing, a slightly more precise use of vocabulary would have helped, although I loved the way you used some unusual word combinations to produce images. The story is the first consideration, and good writing then enhances the story. Thanks for what you gave us . . .

I liked this story. I enjoy stories where friends get to know each other better and become lovers. It's simple, you developed the characters, let the attraction between them build up without too much distracting details (I can't stand it where they have to mention the size of genitalia, it detracts from the story). Congratulations :)