All Comments on 'The Beginning Of Our Affair'

and different. Thank you.

For your lovely feedback.

I wasn't sure about submitting a story with basically no sex but you guys have been really nice about it so thanks xx

I really liked the way this story captured first encounter jitters, and you did a great job establishing the narrator's character. As for the sex thing... Yeah. It's always a little scary trying something less porny on a site like this. It generally turns out okay though I think...

It does capture the experience of meeting someone in person who you've talked to online, as well as the accompanying insecurities. I thought it was great.