All Comments on 'The Belmonts Ch. 01'

by Jett_Black

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mikej2358mikej2358over 16 years ago
Very Nice

I love to have my sister come in my room and fuck me like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
That was hot!!!

Cannot wait for part 2. Plan to read your other stories.... and hope you keep posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nice

continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I loved this please write another part to this

This was great it made me so wet please write another part to this

JagnagJagnagabout 6 years ago
Why the constant colour emphasis !

You stated you were black, ok, followed by constant referalls of black this, chocalate that, it ruined the story.

No other writers refer to the skin tone more than once or twice but yours was over n over again.

2* only, infuture describe the looks, the colour then ffs dont mention it again !!

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOneover 5 years ago
Naughty...But Nice

Not only is this the title of one of my favorite black erotica novels, but it also describes this piece of erotic fiction as well. Excellently worded and sensually naughty. Please keep up this fine work of fiction, I await your next installment. Also, pay no heed to those that criticize mentioning the beauty of the African diaspora. Those that dont get it, will complain no matter what. Those that love it, can't wait for more!!!

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