All Comments on 'The Benefits of Boring'

by Jenna Grey

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SappholoversSappholoversabout 20 years ago
Mango Salsa

I've always thought there was nothing closer to the sensation of eating pussy than eating a mango. I've tried mango salsa, and it's great: this story is just as hot and even more delicious. It's very well written, and I loved the way it had the reader swelling and cresting--or almost cresting and then finally cresting--as I felt as beautifully teased and taken as the woman in this story. It had me thinking that the mango would have done even better than the apple as a temptation for Eve.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It's not ok

It's not ok to make a casual, completely dismissive reference to rape, even if it's simply kissing.

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