by Evil Alpaca
Here I thought that I wasn't going to see another story for some time and this one shows up and WOW. Very nice start. Can't wait for the next chapters.
That's an intriguing start. I suspected that the 'kidnappers' were werehyenas after you specifically noted their proclivity toward laughing a couple of times but you totally surprised me with the 'T-girl' thing. And I love your use of humor! Damn, now I want chocolate...
Great Fun! I've really enjoyed it so far and hope more is to come.
I have to say that when you wrapped up the previous story I wasn't expecting another great story :) lol I hope you update soon
Two awesome stories back to back. Hot dam Christmas has come really early this year thank you so much.
After your last brilliant story, I had feared it would be a long time before you updated again. Thanks for proving me wrong with another great read.
S.N.
Another excellent adventure. Thank you for allowing us the opportunity to sit on the edge of our chairs and truly enjoy the fruits of your labor.
Well this is interesting...in a great way...plus ive been looking for a story with this "subject" for a while now and who provides it...my favorite author...Evil Alpaca...well congrats again...
Seriously, how did I miss it? I'm actually a little pissed at myself. Glad I came across it... wasn't expecting you to post anything so soon after Flying Blind. I LIKE where this is going so far :)
Off to read the rest!
I am in love with this story. It is hilarious. Can't wait to read the rest. Great job.
xoxo
C.
Just wanted to know though, is the princess underage? Maybe age does not matter in a fiction elf world or even as each individual as they mature in their own world.
Trina is 40 and Vanesse is 25, who is underage?
I'm having a lot of fun reading this story. Yes the werehyenas' sexuallity is a twist that surprised me but it's kind of cool once you pass the initial shock :D . At the very beginning the family ties were a little confusing. You might want to doublecheck that. You initially said the king is the Shepperd's nephew and then he's described as a second son.
To the other readers: I agree. Nobody is underage here. Actually if I followed correctly, Vanesse's parents were killed when she was around 10 then she was shipped off when she was 15 and has spent the last 15 years isolated so she is in fact 30 years old. And at some point it was mentioned that Trina is 20 years older than Vanessa. I suppose that given the long lifespans we could imagine that 30 and even 50 are quite young for fae creatures but still it seems that the sci-fi authors generally agree to keep 18 years old as adulthood standard mark.
I had a lot of fun reading this story series. For anyone just looking, you should read "To protect and serve" first. Both are great but this one builds on that series.
But It mostly can stand alone, (Simi-spoiler ahead) although; the caretares of the other searies will show up near the end.
I've probably read this and 'Flying Blind' more than any series on Lit and they never fail to entertain.
Hyena female masculinity is literally a hyper enlarged clit. If the weres used magic to emulate that, a perfect cock with a functional vagina would have been their obvious choice. That would be more pleasurable for the characters, and true futas make for _much_ more erotic reading. Balls are overrated. Missed opportunity 4/5