All Comments on 'The Best of The Worst'

I know you help others out with editing. It's starting to affect your stories - I think this is the best you have written.

Thanks for the great read.

Max

please don't stop editing for others.your worst story is the best on this site.

unbelievable. Nothing GREAT about it.

A Great Read, with many happy endings.

wallowing in self-pity and depression.

Kind of a fun story.

Regards, Jack

It was fun & easy to read. Down right enjoyable. Thanks for your efforts, author.

Definitely not a reality story. Personally I would

classify it as humour!

The only thing I craved and did not get was to have Yvonne

realize that our boy was up for three times a day all week

long. Oh well, at least his best friend made a bridge to his

future family...

the first reaction of most betrayed women is to jump the bones of the husband of the woman who betrayed them. Nice execution of that idea.

Wonderful entertainment to lose yourself in for a few minutes. Such good fantasy!<P>Thank you for your excellent effort.<P>PT

First of all I hate that I can only give it the highest rating

of 100%. If I could give it more I would. Now I feel vindicated that I have been reading stories on Lit for years and finally have found someone like myself. Someone who didn't start crying and walk away. Someone that didn't have his feet frozen in place. Someone who took the old bull by the horns. Someone that didn't puke. Someone that didn't want to suck her lovers cum from his cheating wife's cunt. And most of all someone that didn't let the man get off scott free like so many of the so called writers have done. I am putting my name to this because I want to show you how much I appreciate you.

After all of the disgusting cream-pie cuckold wimp stories we've had on this site recently, this story is very refreshing and erotic yet it didn't lose sight of the importance of the relationship side of sex. Well done!

in the various unappreciated cyber posting venue, techsan is one of the most mediocre writers! <p>

or, if you think that's too much of an ad hominem, how about for such a praised and underappreciated editor, techsan has churned out, on an-almost consistent basis, the mosts average to below average stories? <p>

i could never understand why that is so, since he, as a volunteer editor, has come across more bad, good, and exceptional stories and techniques than most readers; and yet, even with such a background, techsan has never been able to write a single story that I like to point out as "an excellent story."

again, that puzzles me because i respect him as an editor, a job he generally does well, considering the posting venues he volunteers for....

thoroughly readable and enjoyable story, well written and thought out.

I think you had fun with this revolving here we go again revenge trip. It wasn't serious oh great mean anon. commentor.<P>

In the spirit of funnsies you did good Author. All I can say is it is fortunate for your health that your ex didn't have 10 more lovers - you would have been down to a worn out nubin and perhaps a grave [but smiling].<P>

Thanks Author - We know your hearts in the write place whether righting or editing with style and skills.<P>

With High Regard

Reasonably good writing. So-so characters. If you think that women who've been cheated on by their husbands routinely go for revenge sex, you're living in a fantasy world. It didn't work for me in this story because it made the wives seem air-headed, venal and stupid. They were wronged by their husbands but chose willy-nilly to violate their marital oaths for some strange cock. It's a pathetic morality that promotes this type of thinking.

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Insofar as the hubby's revenge on the husbands is concerned, it shows how immature he is. Fucking other women while you're still married means you're just another cheater, nothing more, nothing less. You've disrespected your own marriage vows so you can get some payback. It makes you no better than those you loathe and detest. You've given away your self-respect and your dignity so you can squirt in a strange pussy. How sad.

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As fiction goes, the plot is repetitous and frankly boring. The additional sex scenes as Ray "works" his way through the bevey of MILF beauties all of whom immediately want to have sex with him because he's such a stud are the worst kind of puerile, contrived trash. If this story is the best of the worst, I'll pass.

Could easily have been in in "humor" section as well. Very droll, tongue-in-cheek story, liked it very much.

I could picture you laughing as you wrote it. Readers have to understand, some of us writers write what we feel.

Good Job.

DG Hear

First, this story was WAY WAY too long for the simple story line. Three wives at most would have made the very modest point.

Second, why th' hell do you keep writing "the hell" as "th' hell" with more than one character. It's a silly affectation and after maybe the second time it is annoying.

I'd suggest looking into literotica's volunteer editors. A good one would have pointed out both of these problems, and a number of others.

I stopped reading this piss-poor trash when the stupid cuck husband asks "What th' hell is going on here?" as his best friend is fucking his cheating wife in his bed. I refuse to waste my time on such a ridiculous story. This writer is no better than the worthless queers that have infested this site.

Although I think one poster said it about right---too many women.. The man became a fucking machine.. I suppose it's possible but, I think, not likely.. Janice is an unusual woman.. Putting up with his screwing all of those women?? Again, possible but unlikely.. The encounters were each rather sexy.. I enjoyd the story but I kept looking for him to kick some ass.

just great

There was so much sex and more sex here that As far as the second half of LITEROTICA goes – mission accomplished is an understatement. Another valuable plus here: the story does not seem to take itself too seriously at any particular moment and those who berate a question like "what’s going on here” in the face of the wife and the friend doing the nasty, might have missed a burlesque like humor which was laced into the story together with the sex. <P>

I’d say that style wise the story would have benefited from some more variation on the theme of “I came to talk about a private matter” (the line is self became more and more funny as the story proceeded). But the ‘interactions’ which followed became a bit repetitive after a while. <P>

It did not get in the way of the fun though and we do need more of it in those hot dreary days. Thanks.

One question though,what happened to the former high school lover and the man from the the supermarket? They appear to have got of completely free.

Really this one should have been classified as either Humour

or Irony! After all he was the one guy around who could have

handled Yvonne's needs and she never thought to fuck him into submission so that she could justify taking on lovers!

What a tale! It didn't take him long to jump into all these other beds. It is a fantasy and I mean fantasy. I just couldn't see all these distraught women saying "take me now". I think most women would require proof from someone they didn't know and not necessarily want to have revenge sex immediately.

If she sticks to editing other puta writers OK and since there ain't no real males writing this kinda trash I suppose . . . but as a writer herself she sucks big time.

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That's the extent of what you've said. How can anyone understand what you're trying to say when that's all you say.

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If the wife kept having sex with other men after becoming engaged and after the marriage ceremony, an attorney could ask for an annulment, based on fraud. Yvonne falsely swore an oath she had no intention of keeping. I know thuis storey was just a fantasy, but I wonder if a judge would be entertained enough to grant an annulment in such a case.

I guess that his conquests went overboard, but, hey, this is literotica! For the previous commentor, your idea is interesting but not right. Marriage is not an oath per se, but a contract. Your vows before each other have no legal significance. So, no you could not claim fraud. Another point is that many states now no longer have annulments. I assisted a case in California where the marriage lasted until the reception. The parties had not consumated their relationship. Unfortunately, the paperwork was filed. The young lady did not want a divorce but that was all she could get under California code at that time (15 yrs ago). Even though it was outside of the code, the judge granted her petition on the basis of common law (he felt sorry for her!) Thanks, -Ttom

I enjoyed your story, but sometimes wondered how ole Ray could go so many times in a day! But, then, it is fiction, isn't it?

But none the less a very interesting read. Well done Techsan.

I gave it 1 star.

Since DWornock gave it 1 star I'll give 4 stars. DWornock should keep his idiotic comments to himself.

As DG Hear expressed it, the writer had to be filled with mirth as he wrote this. This is far removed from what I personally like, yet, I found it enjoyable to read, as I, on occasion, find flirting to be fun.

As far as revenge stories go, if it came to it, I'd want my revenge in the same manner if my heart would hold out.

she got hit by a parked car

I liked this story very much. I feel , like some others, that this story was more than a bit "tongue in cheek" and was not intended to be taken too seriously. Seen in that light it was quite the entertaining tale and was nicely erotic. Obviously there are revenge stories and then there are revenge stories of a different sort. This was one of the latter kind.

I suppose it would pretty much be a near universal opinion that if a man must go through the pain and humiliation of finding his ostensibly faithful wife in the throes of passion with another man, this would be the ultimate balm for his soul. Of course in real life this would never likely happen, at least with this many of the wives of his rivals. It was also a bit fantastic that his wife's eventual replacement would be understanding enough to allow his "revenge" to continue on to this extent, but here again it is obvious that the point of the story is not to be taken too literally.

The story was well written, the grammatical errors non-existent, and the characters were well described and fleshed out. As I opined earlier, I felt it was quite an entertaining story and I enjoyed it greatly. I gave it four well deserved stars.

IS IT QUANTITY OR CHANGE OR QUALITY. TK U MLJ LV NV

story doesnt work for me.. to much fucking

Yes, perhaps it was a bit much, but I liked it. One additional thing would have finished the story off so well though. If Janice had run into Yvonne somewhere and told her how Ray had kept seven women satisfied for months and months and that when they all went their separate ways, he was doing her three or four times in one day.

Thanks for writing!

You write in confusing sentences. For example, the top of page 3: "Then why do we not go to my bedroom and let us see what develops."

Why do we not go to my bedroom? I never, ever met anyone who talks like that in real life. Your dialogues are contrived and cardboard. Not natural.

So, while you take such pride in your punctuation, your wording leaves quite a bit to be desired. And, your punctuation is way too many commas laden anyhow.

But, thanks for the effort.

Hopefully an epidemic of AIDS is started with the bitches dying out.

I don't know where to begin. It's first of all unbelievable that ALL the women (let alone that ANY of them) WOULD even have revenge sex with him. With the 7 women, none of whom used or insisted on condoms, (he, of course "knowing" that THEY were ALL pure as driven snow...excepting of course the open marriage), PLUS the seven slug husbands and the possible (likely) scores of their partners; this schmuck has definitely had 'unprotected' sexual contact with a MINIMUM of 14 people (definitely more, when you consider the open couple's contacts)....and that assumes that his wife was being honest with her list (and of course we know SHE's entirely truthful). SO, I'd have to guess he and EACH of the women have been directly or indirectly in 'unprotected' contact with any number from 14 to many hundreds...even thousands of others (many of whom are cheaters, so multiply that figure even further). Talk about suspension of disbelief. SORRY, this isn't even a decent 'stroke' story. Even a 13 year old boy with hormones ablaze wouldn't get off on it...even the anger/revenge factor didn't hold up; the sex was a total bore.....it was purely a (keep track of my) numbers game.

The only good aspect to this is that I just read it now, and it was likely written well in the past, so hopefully you've improved immensely since then. I know I've seen many excellent writers singing your 'editing' praises, so I can (and do) hope.

and how far to go for a start over anew. TK U MLJ LV NV

I thought that this writer would be more mature in his stories. Alas, it is not to be. Pity.

hell i liked it.

pretty much says it all, his "stories" are shit on a stick so no wonder he got all tingly in his bunghole over this nonsense

OKay, it is a schoolboy joke. Nicely told and written but nevertheless a dreadful concept. Read Alveron53's or LBuddG's comments, mine are the same. I am sure you can do much better and add more laughs.

I don't care for an unbelievable story where the cheated on woman instantly throws her clothes off and her legs spring apart. No good for me.

... because the same thing happen to me in my teenagev dreams. Panther Fan.

It seems that I have seen your name credited as editing other authors on Literotica.

I find it interesting that this story by and editor would have errors in it, but when I think of it, it might not be so unusual -- perhaps you don't have an editor.

In any case, I enjoyed your stories and gave you high marks.

Thank you.

Ray awoke.

Probably more fantasy than fiction. Well written but I agree it is a teenage level story.

So because the husbands are useless, all these women lose their morals as well????? What a total piece of garbage....

is not the Sex, it's the get back/pay back in full reckoning, TK U MLJ LV NV

You ass holes who haven't figured it out and continue to think it's real. Will forever be as lost and mindless as that tass317. tass317 has no idea! And continues to make mindless stupid pointless comments to many stories. Comments which does not input any constructive addition to anything which is moving forward. Maybe that's why the Enquirer is so popular, people know better but, can't get it into their heads those stories although based on reality aren't real either! Maybe they also believe The Men in Black are real too.

(The MEN IN BLACK quote, "the Enquirer, best reporting on the planet ")

Nothing real about it.

Just about as ridiculous as it gets!

True, it is a work of fiction. Even so, good fiction has to have some resemblance to real life. This story doesn't meet that criteria. Two stars for effort on the part of the author.

Maybe (just maybe) one of them mighta done that ... maybe.

3*

That's why it's fun -- and funny.

So techsan thought up an excuse (reason?) for a man to have sex with 7 women. Then the varied situations, from Wendy who flatly "knew" her virtuous hubby was not unfaithful to Sonja who knew that he was unfaithful and did not care. But the constant is that each woman thinks it's a good idea to have revenge (or not) sex with him -- lucky bastard!

Then techsan goes further with his live-in fuck buddy Janice sitting him down for a "serious" discussion to tell him all this fucking is needed! At this point I'm chuckling at how clever techsan is at giving this guy more excuse (reason?) to fuck multiple women -- all hot, of course (this is Literotica). Intensified by Janice's meeting with the fuckees in order to further legitimize and encourage Ray with all these women wanting him (what a male fantasy!). Then techsan -- clever fellow that he is -- transforms this serial fuckathon into a romance, turning our fucking hero into a monogamous, happily married, loving family stalwart. Whew!

My humor, already primed by the story, goes into fullblown laughter at the comments. Especially at the critics who are so negatively analytic, taking so seriously what is a fun little fantasy. So, after laughing my way through the comments, I'm left with a cheerful feeling. Thanks, techsan. Great going.

One of the better stories in Loving Wives. For that matter in Literotica.

Paul in Oklahoma

A ridiculous fantasy like this story. Good job.

Zootime in the closet boy, of course it's unbelievable. It was obviously MEANT to be a fun bit of fluff. Unbelievable? You bitch about the transporter in Star Trek movies don't you. You were probably the boy who reminded the teacher she had forgotten to give the class the test she promised.

Note to Alvaron-it's Literotica you twit. It's SUPPOSED to be mostly a fantasy world.

Anon 9/2, again it's part of the tongue in cheek humor. I'm guessing no one laughs when you tell jokes.

Anon 9/3, your post is what they call "projection".

Nightowl, not likely? You think? Thanks Captain Obvious. Again, it's tongue in cheek ridiculous humor. You probably shouldn't try to tell jokes either.

Anon 9/7, again, google "projection".

Dwornock, boring to you is an opinion you are entitled to. Implausible? Well no shit Sherlock. Read above.

Remora, as far as your heart holding out, I'm rooting for you.

Anon 25, I can't believe I've never heard that phrase before. I'm definitely stealing it.

Betterending has a point.

Anon 8/12 - see "projection".

LBud - congratulations, you have managed to beat out all the commenters above in terms of cluelessness.

Anon 5/8 you include yourself with the other clueless commentary but come nowhere near LBud's effort.

Anon 8/7 I'm going to quit bothering to mock anon commenters stupidity due to volume...unless they make an outstanding effort like LBud. You guys probably bitch about puns too and don't understand the author of the pun is laughing at you when you bitch and criticize.

Anon 12/3 OkiPaul gets it. Well summarized.

Anon 2/1, yes, anything that gives a chuckle in this over serious world is a good thing.

Thanks for the laughs Tech.

Comment on this author's story list. Of all these different categories, the biggest WTF is the incest category. All you enjoying and or writing in that category should seek counseling.

Not fun or fluffy, but a completely mirthless waste of time, devoid of any meaning or depth in any way.

Reading the subtitle gives the impression that perhaps the husband will fall into the same habits as the wife - Hey, I'm game. But no, it's a volley of trashy bitch talking. No humor. No slapstick. Not much of anything.

Hubby is really heartbroken, though! Not. He's got a mindless std fest to conduct. It's a mad mad mad mad world in that neighborhood!

A wife who screws a small army of men in rotation behind her husband's back three years running isn't going to sit immobilized in the corner chair weeping. More bitch tawking. Isn't there a way to add some madcap wacky fun to this? Nope.

There is something strangely hollow and one dimensional about this scenario. Just plain weird. Not fun. Not particularly evil. A complete waste of time.

But a decent BTB and revenge story overall.

No love, no respect, no honour, what type of relationship (s) is that.

Makes me feel slightly nauseous.

Ok, wife screwing 11 - 12 men is quite a shock and he needs to leave her. Your story indicates that he had unprotected sex with 7 women - the wives of his wife's lovers - ALL WITHOUT A SHRED OF PROOF! Most wives would insist on proof, and then depending on the husbands character may insist on speaking to them first. What if the husband didn't cheat, and the wife had revenge sex when there wasn't a cause for revenge? This story should be full of STDs and pregnancies with no idea who the father is. Jerry Springer would have to have a week special to cover this mess.

I guess that just goes to show that one has to go back a long way to find the kind of quality that just doesn't seem to be around much anymore.

I was hoping for some babies and possibly more the one wife in the end

Fucking ridiculous.

Five stars!

Not really over the top at all, just a good revenge story.

I can't believe that 95 to 97 percent of writers just ignore the issue of STD's. This writer is worse by including a couple with an open marriage.

There should be a category called Silly Nonsense. Ray couldn’t keep one wife satisfied but could seven others?

Imagine telling the same story with just one twist. Imagine that the wife did not cheat and he just went around telling wives that their husband had cheated on them with his wife with no more proof than he had here (none). Imagine all those wives jumping into bed with him for revenge without any proof of betrayal. Husbands would be divorcing their wives and we would be calling them dumb sluts. Is there any difference? Those women were absurdly gullible.

just a bunch of whores, exposing themselves to STD's coming and going, while pretending to take the high road over their spouses.

STUPID!!!

Fun revenge story, even if it was highly implausible

Hah

Great story. And finally, Ray and Janice lived happily ever after .Well Done 5/5

Ok story, though I'd like to have heard the final reactions of his ex and the other cheaters.

So he “punished” all the husbands but what about his wife?

Love the story, it was great. AAAAAA++++++

Silly stories sometimes pass muster. This does not. It is worse than a juvenile fantasy. If there were that many gullible people society would collapse. A waste of time. To silly to rate. s -100 even possible? :)

.Looolllll!!! THREE TIMES A DAY!!!

The ridiculous part of this story was all the cheated upon wives immediately going to bed with him. Not very realistic.

Should've had a scene where he invited all the wives over, and fucked every single one of them in front of Yvonne back to back, maybe over an entire weekend. Then end it with, "See, you said you needed more than I could give. But I was able to please all these women continuously for an entire weekend, and still had energy left over. So.. please once again, tell me how your cheating, slutty ways are -my- fault bitch."

This story started out well then nosedived... seriously. Every single wife of the guys that fucked Yvonne wants to've revenge sex with him? In one, maybe 2 days?

1st, Ray accepted it all without worries. A pipe dream at the best, beyond juvenile shit at the worst. In doing so, irregardless of what you call it, he became no better than Yvonne, who he's divorcing or divorced.

Janice, the one he says he loves, accepts him having sex with the 6 or so other women, even allowing them to do the deed in her house? Wonder if it meant bedroom also.

i skipped the 3rd page because not only was this story so unbelievable (it's OK to an extent, but this author totally disgarded the barriers) as to make it insulting for me to read before the end of the last page, The result: 1 star. Bob

Stupidest story ever....