All Comments on 'The Best Sort of Bad Day Ch. 01'

That has to be one of the most sensuous sex scenes I've read in a LONG time!! The soft, slow, tender caresses... you captured the intimacy to make this one hell of a believeable story.

You have a brilliant lead for chapter two. Can't wait to read that!! ;-)

I think you set a new Lit record for the number of times that someone had used the word "Fuck" in one story!

I liked it. Thought it was well done. I don't think I have ever read a story with the F word used so often, but hey it's a style. I read your post on the AH, I too got a 1 for no good reason. Good job.

You're a closet lesbian, aren't you? Very hot, very moist and very well written.

Great Job.

That's one hot little story!

Loved it, thanks.

Now my fur's all wet >^..^<

HOT stuff!!!!!!!

That was fucking HOT!!! I need a cold shower :)

Damn hot story!!

i have read alot of stories and even posted some of my own but never have i read one like this it captures lust and love perfectally hope there is a part 2