All Comments on 'The Best Summer Ever'

Good story but your grammar is terrible making it difficult to read. You definitely need an editor.

This was a very good story except for the grammar distractions. For example, in paragraph 6, you write: ". . .shortly after leaving my mom and I and before being sent to prison." It should be, my mom and me. So many people on the site use "I" improperly because they are unsure when to use "me." In this case, say the sentence using only "I."

". . . shortly after leaving I and and before being sent. . ." Then say it using "me." "

. . . shortly after leaving me and before. . . "

The one that makes sense on its own is the correct word to use.

You also do this in the 3rd to last paragraph: "Something erotic that only her and I understood and shared. " It should be "she and I understood and shared." Again, use them separately: "her understood" or "she understood."

I only comment because it was a good story and errors likes these can take away from the overall impression of the reader.

Did you two ever get together again. If you were the head strong young man you said that you were, you would have thought up any skeme, or gone to any lengths to get to her again. I know that I would have.

Great story but you killed it with a "SHIT ENDING". OMG you had soooo many ways you could have gone with this. So disappointed..

Life is like that. Sometimes you have an idyllic island of bliss within the ocean of life. Eventually you have to leave.

You build the story really nice but end it with a quick jerk off sesion.

Pity it could have been a lot better.

Nice story you should write one where they end up becoming roommates

I hope that you got together later in life.....that was a beautiful story. Thanks

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

What about birth control?

Please continue.

Great story, longer stories from you would really be good too, just a suggestion.

Cloths are not clothes although at times you can use certain cloths for clothes, for example like a bandeau top. You really need an editor. Seriously. At once.