All Comments on 'The Betrayer'

Your understanding of the added excitement that illicit sex has makes me believe that this is a real story. You write well, keep up the good work.

The whole line about how women had been doing this since Adam and Eve. Takes two to tango and I am sick of guys blaming girls for something that should be shared 50/50

I would have liked this better if it had turned out that Ally was lying about Ryan just to land the narrator.

dont worry about knocking her up