- NonHuman
- The Bighorn Pack
- Page 3
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Kaylee climbed the porch and started her change. When she was human once more, she was met with a blanket to wrap in and a cup of hot chocolate provided by her mate. She was happy to sit on the back deck with him. To get to know him a little more.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI think the author decided not to update. No updates over a year.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoWHERE IS CHAPTER 2?????????? Really good story here. 5 STARS!!!! Please please please continue this!
dairetoover 10 years agoIt was a very good start to a longer story.
I would love to read more
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoDon't let others get you down. You laid a good background for why she is the way she is. Also when finding your other self maybe you would change for the better. I know when I found my husband I changed but still had stuff to work on. So good job.
southernmisfitalmost 11 years agoWhat does a respectable alpha wolf want with that whiney, immature, weak, clingy teenage girl...
Sorry, but Kailee totally turned me off as a main character of a werewolf story.
willieonealmost 11 years agoSorry but I find that I don't feel anything for your main character, K just irritates me to no end,I find it hard to care about her at all. She show no respect for her Alphas and treated her previous Alpha like dirt even though he has raised her and the Omega this was just to wierd. I do like her mate though and feel sorry for him being stuck with such a whinning bitch.
That's just me opinion as it seems everyone else thought she was awesome but to each their own.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agobut you need to work on your spelling a little- shuttered should be shuddered, etc. Also, it seems a little early for a girl with abandonment issues to be happy and content feeling.... The knot thing... it seems to imply potential fertilization; it would be horrible, I think, to become pregnant right away, before really getting to know her mate...
As a Briggs fan, I'm not sure I like your use of what seem to be her themes- werewolves revealing themselves, the Omega aspect, and being right there in the same Northwest neighborhood...
Overall, your writing is good, and I'd like to see Kaylee's relationship with Hunter develop, as well as her roles in the pack- not so much as an omega, but as the Alpha's wife.
From a graphic/physiological standpoint is she only going to be able to orgasm through penetration, or is that a condition exclusive to being in heat?
