by Fallen_Paladin
Well done I enjoyed it immensely. Please consider writing sequels but if possible keep it within the bounds of realism as you have done here. The fact that your story gave pleasure to both parties without publicly demeaning Julia (too much) or making her into some fucktoy for half of Brent or Camden or the security guard his dog and the pet cockatoo etc was soooo refreshing.
Stories that are well written and have a sense of realism are such a pleasure to read.
Steve
Really enjoyed it from start to finish and looking forward to the next chapter
Very well written, drew me in start to finish and I loved it all!!!