All Comments on 'The Birthday Party Ch. 01'

Thank you for writing. Like the way you've set up the characters and put everything in motion. Can't wait to see where it goes from here!

Very interesting and well written. Yet I am always amazed when someone says they would never do anything to jeopardized their relationship or do anything to hurt the other person as they do exactly that. Why bother with the lie? At least the is some honesty as she tells Daniel it doesn't matter what he thinks about it.