All Comments on 'The Birthday Surprise'

and M O R E

Thank you for your story. Please keep on writing it sounds like you have a bit more subject matter to share with us :)

FYI, I LOVE to hear my wife tell me about her wild days before we met...Maybe you should share some of your stories with your husband. You might be surprised at his reaction!

Jim

jwunpa@yahoo.com

I enjoyed this first story of yours. Please write some more.

I liked the way you developed her character. It made her, and the story, all the more believable.

Leto423

You did well with this story. Keep up the good writing. I look forward to reading you again.

The story was quite short, but you did a good job of developing the character and the situation. The last paragraph seemed a bit rushed, but overall very enjoyable and sexy.

The story was quite short, but you did a good job of developing the character and the situation. The last paragraph seemed a bit rushed, but overall very enjoyable and sexy.

Very well done... It had me hooked on every word... I look forward to reading more of your stories... (BTW... Wunderbar means wonderful in german)