by Samuelx
The only good comment I can make about these stories is that they are short.
The writing is good from a technical standpoint, but the story is rambling, and not at all interesting. :(
"What is it with drunken white guys having the urge to hurl slurs at other people?"
Tell me, if this sentence read "What is it with drunken niggers having the urge to hurl slurs at other people?" or "What is it with drunken Jews having the urge to hurl slurs at other people?", would you be able to see what's wrong with it?
You're a racist, SamuelX - your stories all reek of it.