All Comments on 'The Bite'

Now I throughly enjoyed this story. It was very well written and deeply erotic. I do enjoy a good vampire story although i am aware that many of them are very similar to one another. This one was different enough to make it engaging and the description of the characters's thoughts and feelings certainly raised the heat level. One of the best stories I have read recently. Well done.

delicious comments. exactly. i love reading paranormal and erotica,so your stories just lite me right up! thanks, snick, your efforts are devine. loved that he calls her little girl,love his dominance and her submission.i was spell bound,hanging on to every detail. once again loved it. please write more for us. brooklyn.

I would love to read more about these two this story was very hot and erotic!

Well done! Seemed kind of strange the he and his coffin were still in the building, but it still worked out well.