by Mild Mannered Author
Wow, that was good. really good. You're a talented author, especially for the field (or genre, or what-have-you) that you choose to write in.
Very erotic. Refreshing sometimes to read stories that are not so degrading to the heroines. Nice fun and sexy read.
Trent Wolf
Oh man! Black Cat has always been one of the sexiest characters in the Marvel U, and this was by far one of the hottest stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work....maybe Emma Frost next? or maybe touch on the Avengers?
"Realistic" would seem a strange word to use, but that is how I see your stories. They aren't the humiliation stories so many other people write. But you keep the characters true to form, and that is what makes it so good.
This is easily one of the best stories I've ever read, erotic or not. Like an earlier commenter said, it was very realistic, and the characters were portrayed excellently. Really liked your other stories, too.
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Encore!
but I was won over the more I read. Aside from some clumsy metephors and some lackluster adjectives I really enjoyed this story.