All Comments on 'The Black Velcro Choker Redux'

Hopefully the original author will read your version and see how it's done!

An appropriate roasting.

Good story. Thanks.

If only it worked like this in the "real" world.

Amusing, but over the top.

@Infosauger

"Just one question: What das this sentence mean?

"One of his friends gave me a gift that keeps on giving on both sets of my lips.""

Herpes sores, both oral and genital.

Re the story, it was really quite cartoonish, but it sounds like the original was as well. If the original favored the cheater, I have desire to read it. 4*

BTB crispy with fries, 5*****

Outstanding!!!!!

HAHAHAHA well done!!!!