All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 09'

by AutumnWriter

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rgraham666rgraham666over 17 years ago
The people…

are on the march and nothing can stop them.

This chapter is a good illustration of that. Scary stuff.

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 17 years ago
Scary stuff !!!!!

Yes, really scary stuff! Goebels and his 'Ministry of Propaganda' proved that "the bigger the lie, the more people will believe it". The Reverend Ethan seems a worthy successor to Goebels! AutumnWriter has brought home the real and ever present dangers facing us from opportunistic bigots. Well done! Pete.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
The excitement continues!

Loved the characters of Brad and Becky. AutumnWriter has that uncanny ability to make you care for his characters as if they were real people ~ and isn't that the mark of an excellent Writer? Terrific Chapter. Enjoyable and exciting read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This chapter is very weird.

It seems that everyone in town is perverted or has a secret. Beginning to be a little surreal.

TonyKiwiTonyKiwiover 6 years ago
gone stupid

wife swapping and adultery, this story has degenerated into the gutter, could have been so much better. I'm gone. TK

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