All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 12'

Another superbly written chapter to an excellent tale! Jarrod is now obviously in control of the Reverend and events. There also appears to have been some 'history' between him and Judith. His cynical plans for Tracy and the Reverend clearly show just how much control he has over events but, as yet, his true reasons remain unclear! James has developed a conscience too late in the day and his ill conceived rejection of Abby was a stupid mistake since he has turned her into an enemy. Pete.

AutumnWriter never ceases to amaze me with his use of dialect done so accurately it's like being there and listening to his characters actually talk. Another wonderful chapter by a first class writer. Terrific Write!

I liked the last words delivered by Fr. Brendan.