All Comments on 'The Blameless Bystander Ch. 16'

The title tells it all.

Boyd

Please start another soon.

An ending that provides that ever welcome 'feel good' feeling. A beautiful story well told.

Thank you.

Yes AutumnWriter this has been a fine tale of sombre intrigue! The ending provided a warm feeling of 'completion' and all that goes with it. The good feelings generated by this beautiful story make me long for more such excellent writing from you. Please give us another soon. Pete.

---and a very good one at that(count up the earnings of Nora Roberts!). This could really be turned into a interesting novel by sketching in more of the background of the characters and resolving what happens in more detail to the many interesting characters.

Thanks for all the time and effort!

Thank you so much AutumnWriter i truly loved what you did to this last chapter and im glad Jamie and Connie found there calling with her beside him and Father Brendan I`m sorry he passed on AutumnWriter i hope i see and read more stories like this in the future.

God Bless you,

Pat M.

Atlanta,Ga

Congratulation on a story well done, AutumnWriter. So few writers on this site have even a vague clue of how to write. You have proven with this story to be an atypical writer for this site. (yes, that is a compliment) The pacing was like a relaxing Sunday morning curled up with a cup of coffee & the NYT. You avoided a tired cliche, so common on this site, of finishing up with a Disney finish. I look forward to future stories from you.

I could not set this read down, so to speak. What a pleasure to find it on Literotica. Will there be more? Please say yes. The effort you put forth is commendable. My comments here are a bit hollow in comparison. Jamie's adventures, run-ins, disappointments and epiphanies were fascinating to say the least.

I was completely absorbed in this story. Reading it was a pleasure! Thanks The Cobbler

A few places the cadence was a bit slow, but overall, nothing but praise. Characters were rich - and realistic. 'Story quite believable. The characters were particularly impressive for their balance - that seemed to track w/ a mature view of people and their actions - the good, the bad, deep, shallow - both with specific characters and *within* a single character. Its rare to see us human critters painted so well. I've seen it only one other time w/in literotica. Outside, Diana Gabaldon's characters in her huge series 'Outlanders' does this character realism beautifully. I don't think its a technique that can be mastered by any writer - more of a perspective that a lot of living provides. Really well done - Thank You.

What a good series. Suspect that the author won't be contributing anymore and that is a shame.

This was just another wonderful story I have seen on this site. Its not just sex but a story of people's lives of the good and bad than happens to us.

Wonderfully told. 10 stars!! Best I've seen on this site or any other in a long time