All Comments on 'The Book'

It is always good to meet a new author, one who has taken the trouble to 'risk it all' and put their work up for better or worse.

This promises a fair bit, but it is really too short to enable anyone to make much of your talents, and the lack of something 'gritty' makes it even more difficult to comment - please bring us more; in the meantime, welcome, thank you and four stars.

Great first post. Well-written, brief but intriguing. You've set up a mystery with the 'Book' - looking foward to see how it plays out.

Great start. Captured my curiosity. Please continue.

This is an intriguing premise. The characters appear to be literate and sophisticated. Lots of possibilities and I'd like to see where you go with it.

welcome and please continue